After we had created the first draft of our trailer we received feedback from our class mates, both positive and negative comments were made-
Positive:
No speaking or similar noise- just music which is really effective.
Tension is built up all the way through which makes you want to keep on watching.
Sound picks up at the end of what's been done so far, so you know where the change in tone is.
It's quiet all the way through which is unexpected but good.
The setting is effective.
The captions are convincing.
The camera static is really effective.
Negative:
Fonts need changing/ improving for captions and they either need to be slightly shorter or more text added to them.
The clip of the actors running towards the car needs to be shortened as it looses suspense near the end.
As a result of this feedback, we will adapt the parts of our trailer which received criticism and also develop it further to the end of the piece. We will then get further feedback and again look at the sections which may need improving in order to create the finished trailer.
Positive:
No speaking or similar noise- just music which is really effective.
Tension is built up all the way through which makes you want to keep on watching.
Sound picks up at the end of what's been done so far, so you know where the change in tone is.
It's quiet all the way through which is unexpected but good.
The setting is effective.
The captions are convincing.
The camera static is really effective.
Negative:
Fonts need changing/ improving for captions and they either need to be slightly shorter or more text added to them.
The clip of the actors running towards the car needs to be shortened as it looses suspense near the end.
As a result of this feedback, we will adapt the parts of our trailer which received criticism and also develop it further to the end of the piece. We will then get further feedback and again look at the sections which may need improving in order to create the finished trailer.
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